Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, NZ.
Great work Liam. I can see from what you have learnt that you learnt a vital lesson about checking the ingredients are in date. Maybe next time you could make the ad more clear so we can understand a bit more about what it is like. Why did you make cookies?
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Great work Liam. I can see from what you have learnt that you learnt a vital lesson about checking the ingredients are in date. Maybe next time you could make the ad more clear so we can understand a bit more about what it is like.
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