Friday, 23 June 2017

soccer - show not tell writing

WALT do show do tell to describe a picture.
I enjoyed writing the describing words.
I found it challenging to write the words.

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I Heard yelling from my team mates.
I could  hear people cheering my name
I saw food on the ground
I Saw soccer goals
I Felt shaking all over my body.
I Felt wind in your face
I Wondered If i will score a goal

I Wondered if i will get fouled

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