Monday 15 May 2017

scooter should be bannd

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Scooters should be banned from Paroa school at lunch times.


I Believe scooters should be banned from Parao school at lunch times.


My most important reason is they are dangerous  you can hurt yourself you can fall off  and you can hurt others you can crash into others.   Dangerous sport because kids don't wear safety gear and dangerous tricks spinning over your head.


Another point is it takes over the school because there is less space and less space for others.


Finally when little kids are playing they can't move the handle good enough so they can crash and if their hand is sweaty for your hands you can easily fall off.  

These are the reasons why we should have scooting at school.

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