Friday, 23 June 2017

soccer - show not tell writing

WALT do show do tell to describe a picture.
I enjoyed writing the describing words.
I found it challenging to write the words.



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I Heard yelling from my team mates.
I could  hear people cheering my name
I saw food on the ground
I Saw soccer goals
I Felt shaking all over my body.
I Felt wind in your face
I Wondered If i will score a goal

I Wondered if i will get fouled

Thursday, 22 June 2017

Alliteration

WALT I enjoyed the hole thing I found it challenging thinking what to write

Tuesday, 20 June 2017

Division

Walt Division by 2 what I enjoyed thinking what the answer was. what I found changing was thinking what the answer was.

Thursday, 15 June 2017

Simile DLO

Walt enjoined I enjoined putting the pitches. challenging

Tuesday, 13 June 2017

Right place ,right time, online

Walt Right place, right time, online what found challenging founding the facts what i enjoined writing the facts